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When you look at me
Do you see me the way i see myself,
Broken, but still alright?

Or rather as a doll
Something you can play with
But throw away as soon as my scars
Start to bore you

You always were the charming one
Your black, coal eyes
Drew in all sorts of prey
Innocence at its best

But you could never appreciate
The simple things in life
And that, my dear, is where your greatest fault lies
random. :D comment are always appreciated
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914four Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it. I don't know why but it makes me think of a cat.
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WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
hahaha. thats definetly a unique perspective of it. :D I appreciate the comment. :D
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914four Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
"I have studied many philosophers and many cats. The wisdom of cats is infinitely superior." - Hippolyte Taine
I believe that my cats tolerate me in their house as long as I keep their litter box clean and the food and water dishes full. I hate to think what will happen if they ever decide they don't need me anymore... :-)
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WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
haha. funny. :D
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Lyzethmckee Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
OMG .... AMAZING ..... ***


I LOVE IT >.<
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WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:) that means a lot! :D thank you. you made my day. :D
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Sparta-Art-Anonymous Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Student Artist
Lovely! ^^
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WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you. :D check out my other poetry if you get the chance!
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Sparta-Art-Anonymous Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Student Artist
I just might. :D
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IntraCoastAngel Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What a great poem... I love it!!
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