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It's 4 am
and you find yourself humming a tune
you heard once when you were nine
and you're screaming at the moon
because it seems to have lost its shine

It's 4 am
And all your words tangle up
and you slur as if you've had too much to drink
you're whining like a little lost pup
and cry because you've forgotten how to wink

It's 4 am
and your mind's a mess
you should go to sleep, but not just yet
your eyes start to droop, confess
and your very fingertips are filled with regret
inspired by a conversation about how our minds seem to melt by the time 4 am comes around. comments are always appreciated. :D
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karicom333 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
Awesome =)
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WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hehe thank you again. :D
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karicom333 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
You're Welcome, again, OH! And THANKS FOR THE LLAMA!!! <3
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WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha no problem. XD
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NightlyLies Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
love this, <3
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WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks. :)
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no-ones--Cat Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so true... and of course also really good
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WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hahah thank you. :D and thank you for faveing it. :D
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Namuamazing Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing poem! I have written many poems but I've ran out of ideas! Someone help me with this!!
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WritingObsessed Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you. it's probably just writer's block. search online for some writing activities, or prompts. those usually help me. write about absolutely anything, your room, the object you're holding, yourself, a friend, a dream, anything at all.
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